Plot Outline by SUDIN CHAOHINFA, igood media.
[บทภาษาไทย]
Theme:
If a person is selfishness will consume resources and hurt them. As a result, the environment and natural degraded and shortages, it is the duty of the guardian, to control and prevent the selfish man environmental harm and hurt themselves. In addition Government will need to share existing resources limited achieve justice and spread happiness to all people. Welfare of the ID citizens in the year 2112 is an example of an event that is not an important factor for the ruling system. In order to create equality and welfare, but it is a virtue of the leaders separately.
Genre of film:
fantasy–science fiction–action–war
The premise:
What’s happens with the citizens in the ID city as well. If leader Government, General EINSEN KARL and ABE HERON was killed and a criminal, A.J. HECTOR, Leader of criminal has power.
Synopsis:
ID is the metropolis in the year 2112, crowded with poor people and a lot of pollution. Survival factors of poor is food and weather. The metropolis is ruled by the Dictator’s Government, General EINSEN KARL and special adviser named ABE HERON. They had trouble and suffer because of the crime pester from A.J. HECTOR, the head of the city’s criminals.
GEN-KARL is a policy statement against the underground movement of HECTOR and his gang which to create dissension poor protest Government. HECTOR hopes to topple Gen-KARL. He planned to steal a generate new air machine of Government to the poor for create good points and cover up their bad image. He encourages the people rose up until the revolution. The poor leader named Ethan accepts of HECTOR, so therefore they are opportunistic and HECTOR. Create a riot and violence.
GEN-KARL ordered to HERON confrontation HECTOR and arrest him or caught dead. He knows only person up HECTOR. Because they used to be old friends together before. Gen-KARL commanded troops to break stable zones of HECTOR. HECTOR and the gang have been angry and interact him with kidnap ERICH KARL, the GEN-KARL’s son to be held hostage in a poor district, which is temporarily appointed to negotiate and to revise its own revenge with GEN-KARL.
Both the Government and terrorist to wrestle strategic communications by hacking into the communications network system in order to seize power.
In the end, Ethan Johnson, who is the leader of the poor understanding the intent of GEN-KARL and his friends as HECTOR. He decided take side with The Government and provides GEN-KARL and his son escape to freedom. Let HERON and HECTOR clearing accounts of revenge.
Once the crisis has passed General KARL decided to change the Government’s policy to help the poor more.
Plot Structure
ACT–I
The scene: ID city in the year 2112.
All people in ID is registered with an embedded chip to identify of a citizen, include the leader and staff of this city. Identify chip will be embedded at the occipital area of all children at birth. The circuit of the chip is connected to the DNA of the person who is receiving it, and send a signal between the computer network via satellite network which is the main system and network system digital–magnetic world field which is a system reserved to specify the location on the Earth.
All citizens will benefit from an embedded chip is to perform a legal act of trading communications, as well as the benefits to be obtained from the state and the safety of the life from the criminals and the lack of breathing air. When they were lost in the field of pollution, which will cause the officials or neighbors be in time for help. Because of identify chip will show their location for title track.
Therefore, as anyone have no embedded chip. They are an unlawful person and criminals.
Chip is embedded, with the person throughout life. It can’t remove chips from the body. Because the chips will send a signal to the host that a crack or change its. The officer’s robot installed all around the city will go to take charge immediately. Waiting for an officer’s Government to come and carry out to be punished.
Removing embedded chips are considered guilty by the criminal law, because of the criminal do not want to specify a location for their crime, which risk of being arrested. Therefore, they often to remove chips from the body and hiding from the officer’s robot and was placed in an area that is not secure.
If there is a group of people protests the Government. Officer is how to control the crowd, called “Crowd Control Program” by sending the signal through the soft electric–power of special programs interfere with the nervous system causes the feeling of trance and pain. The high level officials only who running program, which themselves does not to be controlled by special programs.
An ID chip have be buried magnetic crystals are called “Super Paramagnetic”. It has special features that, when its sort of near each other will reaction push or vacuum depending on the angle of the Earth magnetic field do. Magnetic crystals in the chips If the magnetic force arranged in parallel with the magnetic field. It will be the reaction sucking each other. But if it’s put magnetic force is perpendicular to the magnetic field of Earth. It was pushed out. The angle and strength of the Earth magnetic field on every location on Earth, there is a difference. Make a magnetic ore embedded in it is better chips. Acting is like GPS to determine the location of person in ID city.
Therefore, there are no citizens who are escaping or from the track.
ID is the metropolis of the country. Located in the area of physical degradation and pollution which is caused by the environment, industrial air and water pollution, especially citizens, thus the risk of lack of oxygen, air and toxic gas poisoning carbon dioxide and other harmful to life.
Make this city fall into the poor become slum filled with dirt germs drugs and crime. In anywhere, Group of poor wrests and robs the food and air. Period of have not enough fresh air purchase price to sell the oxygen can and filter masks is much higher.
The city is divided into residential area clearly between a poor people and a rich people. Poor zone pushed at the suburban and located below land. Rich zone area is business zone at the heart of the city and is located on a high building. There is a 5–path to travel out of the city via the road super highway, which installed the fresh air pipe for sending to a poor district.
The rich use private trains as the means of have a happy life. Most poor people use the subway as a vehicle, which its difficult life and adventure. Communication systems and mass transit rather get. The poor can often survive with very low light, cell phone is used fail, and subway is not use. Other than the rich is stressed tax in high rate, the poor have not enough air, food and basic welfare of life. But both the poor and the rich, scared the same thing is a crime that often arise unexpectedly.
This is the city’s system of electric money card, which amount indicated in the chip embedded in the value of the exchange. Our cards will have a program associated with an identity code of the owner of the card holder. In order to confirm the value of ownership that holds in the hand so that each money cards with the names and amounts of holders are available to everyone who uses it.
The Metropolis Government is ruled by an autocratic, committee of GEN-KARL is a leader and as the city’s richest.
The financial status of the Government, depending on their tax the rich who owns a business and industrial. Most of the industrial plant used the labor form the robot and the poor guys. They need to work in a factory to exchange for food and fresh air, as well as benefit from the protection of the traffic, which is common in this city.
Character:
General EINSEN KARL is a leader of an influential and powerful city as rich as possible. There is so much love for his son’s name ERICH KARL. His wife died with infectious disease in blood since he was the 7–year’s age. ERICH was raised not to accept any hardship, so ERICH can not know the taste and the misery of poverty and, of course, He never saw a poor habitat. Now, ERICH has been entering adolescence.
GEN-KARL has a major consultant named ABE HERON. Everyone believes that he has the power and the magic. The fact he is a prediction scientist. HERON act consultation and fortune-telling everything to GEN-KARL and accept what he forecast because there is scientific support for its. However the General can order quickly and precisely because he has a good programmer is located near him.
Private TONY and Private DODGE as an army soldier is allowed to drive forward the general duty to put off changing the merge. Garnet Aspen as a highly intelligent woman and there are excellent human relations psychology as secretary general of his people, and also as a trainer and teacher of ERICH.
JANE KENDA, as a young bisexual person who keep control of all computer systems as administrator. One reason that he has trust, honesty and intelligence in the computer software and communications. GEN-KARL sees him when he has be hacking into the system network of the General. When the investigation it appears that the fact he was taken just a young child who only lark about. But the General like his talents and find his intelligence. It is best to turns his programmer the first (A.J. HECTOR) as Jane into acting instead and since then. The network system of the ID city has big change and has been developing rapidly.
Lieutenant General MAC LYMAN as Home Secretary and Minister of Interior. Duty to take care of military and police. In this town, he has privileges to is not under the Crowd Control Program as well as his General, ERICH and HERON. LTG–MAC LYMAN is directed and highest commander in chief for Crowd control function.
Minister ERWIN COLE, duty to take care of the city’s financial and tax tracking from high–income people, groups and businessmen in this town.
EMMA HARRIET President of the municipality is another one of those steel women even see fat chubby but took a very good job of removing her citizen. She will reportedly air pipe system oxygen control. Water and food submitted to the poor people so that they feel too difficult, because otherwise they will come out and protest, which occurred frequently.
Mr. ROY ANDERSON is big businessman in the metropolis as well as tycoon. He sold the robot, air craft, diet capsules, and other machine to the Government and other countries. And so they tax the highest in the city. He negotiates with the Government as the Prime Association of entrepreneurs in the city, it is better to have a tax abatement, but without effect.
Mr. STEVE WEST is a business owner factories producing computer chips, micro-processors and software as part of the Government, that as a professional in foreground. But the background, he has manufacturing weapons sent to General KARL. He is the only personal favorite of GEN-KARL and often receives special benefits as compensation. Therefore, he secretly manufacture weapons and smuggle out to criminals at the same time that GEN-KARL does not know about habits are not loyal of Mr. STEVE WEST. He makes business by motto; not have good friend and a permanent enemy. Everything depends on the different benefits, compensation, which is a major condition.
A.J. HECTOR is headed the criminal, but his minions are often called Big-J. The harshest in this town. He has both the power and the influence of drugs and counterfeit money. He has the money, which is produced using counterfeit money with both trading weapons from Mr.STARK. Have its own zone outside the Western District, and on the ground and the underground tunnel.
HECTOR don’t like the policy system of General EINSEN KARL. In the past, he was a military man of GEN-KARL and an engineer who control computer system for ID metropolis. He joined a virtual shoulder to shoulder buddy get used to his generals since the new towns, so they are familiar with the family of GEN-KARL, but he has the disadvantage that the General was not accepted in his ambition and to socialize. Long after he often interfere in the General both policy and authority. In the end, he has been the General dismissal but not killing him as an old friend, so let him go. HECTOR does not neglect about his grudge and revenge. HECTOR secretly creating influence and its own town, by GEN-KARL may not suppress HECTOR and his minions, because of his clever and talented enough. He is a spear both stab and pester the Government at all times.
[Main plot point 1st.]
HECTOR opportunistic create an image that is bright and let the poor freedom from Dictator Government. The poor reliability and trust HECTOR minions acceptance into membership and they are let HECTOR build their colonies in the area of the poor municipal workers broke through an underground. HECTOR used the underground tunnel as a base commander.
HECTOR is usually to make dissension. A crowd protesting the Government periodically, on the basis of their minions as plotters, chaos destroyed around dropping bombs. They robbed the property of rich people for their benefits and help the poor to distribute creates images that this is the help of the HECTOR who liberate people.
He has a talent for disguise, to plotters in rich ones. He and his minions can avoid arrest from the robot, and the Government officials. He has excellence strategy battles all kinds of weapons and fists, feet, plus a good programmer skill. Of course, that in him and his assistant FRANK and DROGO who will no embedded chip, that it was making him become criminals to vanish and harsh cough in the ID city.
ACT–II
There is more severe toxic pollution. ETHAN JOHNSON, Leaders of the poor were gathering the poor integration of protest in the big time under support and set of HECTOR while Governments present new project machine to generate oxygen gas generators have succeeded (machine take separate waste water into oxygen gas). Protests continue to increase slowly. Gang of HECTOR opportunistic bombings also hurt the Government’s other assets and robot is fun. The clashes between the troops of the HECTOR almost made it to hard war.
HECTOR opportunity to send information to the poor that policy of the Government does, it does only rich people and poor people were oppressive all the time. He asked to cooperate with him drive out Government. While there was a disorder in clash with two leaders, Minions of HECTOR steal oxygen gas generators machine come store in a poor district before to moving into their territory later. HECTOR execute to run a machine create enough fresh air for everyone and all underground tunnel, which does not require additional oxygen gas. Its ease of movement and various actions in the poor area and underground tunnels.
In disorder, HERON was assigned to arrest the HECTOR, either as or die, with the group of hotshot buster. But it is not easy, He and his buster will have to against the 2-barrier is residence form poor people and also was battle form the pirates of HECTOR.
When HERON face with HECTOR each other, knowing that they are be friends together but they have the ideological conflict in later. HERON select the Government but HECTOR desire the benefit of himself. Even though both are equally skilled in combat. HECTOR has advantage in the hiding place without easy detectable and supporting secretly weapon from Mr. Steve West. HERON told aim of the new project machine for the poor. He persuade that the General has not been abandoned his people. They hope to generate new air and well-being to poor people because of the pipe air is sent to poor area is not sufficient. But HECTOR is just believed his movement can set free people. A discussion of them hearing to ears of Ethan.
This confrontation resulted in a tactical combat. As an old friend. As a result, HERON can not catch a criminal. HECTOR fight with tactic and escape in the dark. HERON has losing his assistant to almost half. After the fight, Ethan did not dare to battle with HERON. Because he know that not sure something.
During the rally of protesters have more violent extremists. They burned and bomb a building, stripped and destroyed a robot, train and bridge. Most of the terrorists as they are of minion of HECTOR. And Ethan does not agree with at all. He did not want the people to do it.
GEN-KARL very angry that they could not be held HECTOR and his minions. He command to military forces to a half go to chased HECTOR and a half of military kept guard Government house and protect the General. This is strategy and suggestion of HERON, because of a previous clash with HECTOR, he is not careless in skill of fight of HECTOR.
With a feeling of revenge, HECTOR has been against GEN-KARL with kidnapped ERICH, son of the General held in poor districts. After that the pain went to the heart of GEN-KARL like a needle to pierce the heart. He signed to everyone catch and kills HECTOR to exchange for big award and destroyed immediately den of criminal.
ERICH also is innocent for abduction. He did not know for what reason. He was hide together with the poor, even dirty and stinky, but it is impressive hidden that is considerate of the poor. Although some poor guys also angry his father, but there are other guys that compassion ERICH, Lola, one pretty girl in a poor district.
HERON find ERICH was kept in poor people zone, while the LTG-MAC is commanding his troops attack den of HECTOR. At the same time, HECTOR can hacked the Government’s network. He knew the movements of the soldiers issued their chase and know a location of LTG-MAC and others, making him every advantage.
HERON know about hacking of HECTOR from saying of Jane. Make HERON feel hardly. And the worse is that the General feel anger and starting head off to find his son by not listening to the opposition of HERON, that is he travels to game of HECTOR which may go to his trapped.
According to expectations, GEN-KARL with the military sentinel overstep into poor field. He met with many obstacles is resistance from the poor, they also hurt. The protesters throwing his mission, but he is finding the son by himself. His emotional response, he did not hold the poor because he knows very well that burning, destroying, bombing and other violent not rob poor people, though.
GEN-KARL and Ethan confronted on both sides. They began to understand each other and told GEN-KARL to hidden son. Meanwhile, HECTOR emerged, GEN-KARL seem is mistaken this is Ethan’s plan to bring him was trapped of HECTOR. Ethan fall into recession that could not be explained anything. In this time, he must DODGE other side.
HECTOR present his revenge to GEN-KARL for the General sees and knows what he is doing with the generals in the past, it was to a large mistaken. While he showed revenge on GEN-KARL, He has been reported that his town is being attacked hardly from LTG–MAC. HECTOR decided go to command to battle by himself and taking the General into custody, combined with his son.
ETHAN back to describe the General understanding of the various situations it happens. He wants to correct a misunderstanding. ETHAN offered the opinion that removing embedded chip both of the General and his son, take turns, And then bring its back embedded. Everything is based on to make rapid and coordinated, or HECTOR will catch that has been switch chips. GEN-KARL contact to Jane temporarily disrupt satellite signals for stop the system of communication network.
Ethan told his doctors, Dr.EGON ALVA made immediate surgery. When the Generals had seen Dr.EGON old memories come back again. He wondered why he is here. The doctor explains that he was taken to maintain the patient on arrival here, and see the misery of the poor, it was a pity. For this reason, he doesn’t want to go back to the top again. GEN-KARL feel confident in removing change embedded chip, because he know that Dr.EGON was a best doctor one of the Government’s hands in an embedded chip before.
[Main plot point 2nd.]
During removal and make an excellent chip. Every communication system fails and crashed to vacillate him. Caused chaos throughout in the metropolis. LTG–MAC can not be command to battle the camp of HECTOR. HERON is unable to communicate with anyone at all. Everything it was all confusion. This chaos make damage to HECTOR too, he don’t know what happened to his computer system. But over time, just not long ago, Jane could resolve the problem successfully with bringing a network backup is a network system digital magnetic world. It (the system thought by Jane, HECTOR may not know).
When removing an embedded chips. GEN-KARL wants his sons escaped first by the help of a volunteer, LOLA girl who knows loophole to escape as well from background tunnel. ETHAN takes the General to other path
When HECTOR came back, he found that General and others had no stay here. He killed cruelly the doctor and ordered an assistant minion go to chase GEN-KARL. In that time, He felt hurt and revenge, ETHAN and the poor who is treating the Generals and his son escaped. He ordered to shut down the generate oxygen gas generators machine and destroy it by bomb, as result explosions and a fire around the tunnel.
[Climax]
The General escaped reaches deadlock. ETHAN hiding him and took the trick criminal lost to another. But be unlucky, HECTOR found a prey are escaping. He felt hardly to resent the General ordered to destroy his camp. Then, he went straight to kill GEN-KARL. But HERON come in good time. HERON and HECTOR confront each other again. HERON disadvantage because he did not wear the mask as HECTOR.
These poor people below and in the tunnel began to lack the air and are uncomfortable. Some people need to get an oxygen air, someone is unbreathable toxic air, the generate oxygen gas generators machine was destroyed.
FRANK and DROGO, 2-minions of HECTOR attack HERON in the back. But he not hurt anything. Because ETHAN is preventing the timely and kill them and others. HERON ordered ETHAN took the General escape. He was with HECTOR will also have to remain the old conflict increase.
ACT–III
In high land above background tunnel of site the poor, the smog group spout up in camp site of HECTOR. The General, ETHAN, ERICH and Lola poke out from the hole of tunnel. GEN-KARL command via radio to EMMA HARRIET, President of the municipality accelerate air transmitter along the tube into the poor district to full capacity immediately as fast as, and ordered to Minister ERWIN COLE arrest Mr. Steve West. Later he was retaken his properties and weapons manufacture back to Government. As rebel supporters.
The battle of HERON with HECTOR still continues. HERON felt pine as asphyxiation because lack of air and was hit body until the bruise. He sees the pipe in front of him. HERON tried quickly to crawl forward until through the air small pipe which the oxygen is flowing and rushed into the lungs breath full. While HECTOR is cool and talked to prattle about their past, physical capacity of HERON return. HECTOR strokes accidentally, HERON grab the crossbar which hiding on his back plug into the chest of HECTOR, until he die. This is the closing of revenge between two accounts.
In the midst of the crowd, the Generals, HERON and his son front row on stage and others in behind row. General EINSEN KARL has big speech with a new version of the air generation machine. He announced thanks to poor people in care and rescues his son, make him think that he will have to do something. He will send a new enough air into every point in the poor with a new project machine. It would be building by benefit of the rich from the tax. This is the big good era as part of the poor. The crowd clapping with pleasure.
He will promote education. Replacement planting large areas of degraded and polluted industrial systems revolution. Under the restoration and conservation of the environment granted to the city.
The crowd outside cheered with pleasure sounds resonate through the ID metropolitan city.
END.
Film school – Plot Date: 05-04-2016
Copyright Year: 2013
The inspiration for this idea:
This story imagine the create is not worried about production costs, because Thai producer have fixed costs. If not, you can see that the name of the character in story has no Thai name. I have simply asked for cooperation as part of a team, create and perform. Thai movie, don’t be embarrassed or less in front of the neighboring ASEAN countries certainly.
I am convinced and confident like that. This story, during be writing screenplay. Thanks, you see in this line.
February 25, 2013
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